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Scorching heat
Temperature rise
Find me near
Across the sky.

Starry night
On humid day
Find me now
Forbid me stay.

Summer time
So now alone
Leave me now
Please bring me home.

Friends are gone
Away for times
Call me soon
Send me a sign.

Summers' break
Although it's short
Spent alone
Is less a sport.

Summers' night
These stars that roam
As I lay
Summer alone.
©2006-2009 ~Cinderella92
:iconcinderella92:

Author's Comments

Breakdown:

:pointr: Six quatrains.
:pointr: 3/4 meter.
:pointr: Rhyme scheme (A/N: one of the qualities of a ballad.)

A
B
C
B

A result of boredom. Topic/feelings expressed are not personal, just general.

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Nice. I like the way the poem flows... good work!

--
Not by wrath does one kill, but by laughter.
Friedrich Nietzsche

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